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Camila's avatar

This had me HOOKED! So good!! Well done! 👏🏼

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Mark M. Ater's avatar

Thank you, Camila! I really appreciate you reading.💚

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Joseph Mawut Dut's avatar

Amazing Mark

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Mark M. Ater's avatar

Thanks so much, Mawut! Glad you enjoyed it.

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Achot Deng's avatar

Brilliantly written.

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Mark M. Ater's avatar

thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

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XXX_ALFA Amillia's avatar

Great narrative, I like the effects of the description, especially about the forest, ooof had my heart in my hand, lol.

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Mark M. Ater's avatar

Thank you so much. I'm glad the forest scene pulled you in! Means a lot to hear that🙏

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Job Del's avatar

I love your writing. You described everything with vivid details. I do believe angels exist and they serve God, always doing God's good will.

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Mark M. Ater's avatar

Amen🙏 truly, angels are reminders of God's constant presence. Thank you for the kind words.

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mjc@412's avatar

You are so talented son. What a story,I couldn’t stop reading it. Now you see how different you are. All the books you read as a kid have shaped you, and now your writing is authentic, genuine, and beautifully simple. Keep going, kid.

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Mark M. Ater's avatar

Thank you, that really means a lot. Your encouragement keeps me going. I'll keep writing and growing!

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